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Creating Elevator Pitch

Creating Elevator Pitch

Eben Pagan teaches entrepreneurs how to create compelling elevator pitches and unique selling propositions that immediately capture prospects' attention. He provides a proven 5-part formula for crafting powerful statements that communicate exactly what customers want to hear, turning first impressions into business opportunities.

Creating Elevator Pitch

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The Elevator Pitch Challenge

Eben explains why most entrepreneurs fail at first impressions - they focus on themselves rather than their prospects' needs. He contrasts typical responses like 'I'm a writer' with powerful examples that immediately capture attention and create interest.

Overcoming the Modesty Trap

Many experts resist being compelling because they fear seeming pushy or boastful. Eben reframes this mindset, teaching that professional marketing means communicating exactly what prospects want to hear, not being aggressive or humble.

The 5-Part Elevator Pitch Formula

Eben breaks down his proven system: start with 'I help' plus specific prospect, add 'who' plus their problem, state the specific result, include convenience factors that address fears, and end with an engagement hook question that draws them in.

From Elevator Pitch to Marketing Asset

These pitches work as headlines, video openings, and product titles. Eben shows how to condense the formula into tight titles by extracting the most compelling elements focused on results, benefits, and convenience.

Questions This Episode Answers

What should I say when someone asks what I do for work?

If you were in an elevator and someone asked you, what do you do? What would you say? Now whatever you answer must be compelling enough that the person you're talking to would wanna do business with you by the time that you reached the floor that you were going to.

Eben Pagan0:31

Use a 5-part formula: Start with 'I help' plus your specific prospect, add 'who' plus their specific problem, state the specific result you deliver, include a convenience factor that addresses their fears, and end with an engagement question that draws them in without pointing fingers.

How do I create an elevator pitch that attracts clients?

when we're creating an elevator pitch, a short statement that communicates everything the prospect needs to know to become interested and to make a decision, hey, I should check this out. This is the time to wordsmith every single word

Eben Pagan4:34

Focus on your prospect's problem and desired result, not your title. Use Eben Pagan's formula: describe who you help, their specific challenge, the result you deliver, how convenient it is, and ask an engaging question. Wordsmith every word to be crystal clear and compelling.

Should I be modest when describing my business services?

when it comes time to sell, when someone's going to buy something from you or when it comes time to make a first impression, it's not the time to be humble

Eben Pagan3:11

No, when it's time to sell or make first impressions, focus everything like a laser beam to communicate benefits and results. Professional marketing isn't about being pushy - it's about communicating exactly what the prospect wants to hear.

What makes a good elevator pitch question at the end?

this gives the other person an opportunity to answer the question. And either they could say yes about themselves, right, Because it it asks in a way that doesn't point a finger at them. Or they can, they can recommend a friend.

Eben Pagan8:16

Ask a question that doesn't point a finger directly at the prospect but gives them opportunity to respond about themselves or recommend others. For example, 'Do you know any women who would like to lose 20 pounds quickly?' rather than 'Do you want to lose weight?'

How specific should I be in my elevator pitch?

Your elevator pitch is all about you being able to describe who your customer is, what their challenge is, what the result is that they want, how fast, easy, or low hassle you can give them the result

Eben Pagan5:14

Be extremely specific about who you help, their exact problem, and the precise result you deliver. Include specific timeframes, amounts, and convenience factors. For example, specify '20 pounds in 90 days without starvation diets' rather than just 'weight loss help.'

Can I use my elevator pitch for marketing materials?

You can see that these also, by the way, are they're great headlines. Each of these would make great openings to a video. They're they're really great, first impressions, to make on people whether you're doing it in person or you're doing it in a video or online.

Eben Pagan8:36

Yes, elevator pitches work as headlines, video openings, and first impressions whether used in person, online, or in marketing materials. You can also condense them into product titles by extracting the juiciest parts focused on results and benefits.

How to Create a Powerful Elevator Pitch

Eben Pagan's 5-part formula for creating compelling elevator pitches that turn first impressions into business opportunities

  1. 1

    Start with 'I help' plus specific prospect

    Begin with 'I help' followed by a detailed description of your specific target customer, not a generic audience

  2. 2

    Add 'who' plus their specific problem

    Use the word 'who' and then describe the exact problem your prospect is facing in crisp, clear terms they can relate to

  3. 3

    State the specific result or benefit

    Clearly communicate what they will achieve or get - be specific about outcomes, timeframes, and measurable results

  4. 4

    Include a convenience factor

    Address what they fear or want to avoid - explain how your solution is fast, easy, or low-hassle compared to alternatives

  5. 5

    End with an engagement hook question

    Ask a question that doesn't point fingers directly at them but allows them to respond about themselves or recommend others

All Teachings 12

TeachingEmpowering0:31

An elevator pitch must be compelling enough that someone would want to do business with you by the time you reach your floor - you only have a few seconds to make this impression

Eben explains the elevator concept: 'If you were in an elevator and someone asked you, what do you do? What would you say? Now whatever you answer must be compelling enough that the person you're talking to would wanna do business with you by the time that you reached the floor that you were going to.'

ReframeEmpowering1:17

Most people answer 'what do you do' with generic statements about themselves like 'I'm a writer' or 'I'm a relationship coach' - this approach fails because it's all about them instead of the prospect's needs

Eben contrasts typical responses: 'I'm a writer or I have a website or I'm a relationship coach or I'm a weight loss expert and it's all about them' versus his formula that focuses on customer problems and results.

TeachingEmpowering1:50

A powerful elevator pitch example: 'I help overweight women who wanna lose more than 20 pounds get rid of their extra body fat in as little as ninety days without starvation diets or torturing themselves with military exercise. Do you know any women who would like to lose more than 20 pounds quickly?'

This is one of two complete examples Eben provides, demonstrating the full 5-part formula in action with specific target audience (overweight women), specific problem (wanting to lose 20+ pounds), specific result (lose body fat in 90 days), convenience factor (no starvation/torture), and engagement hook.

ReframeEmpowering3:11

When it comes time to sell or make a first impression, it's not the time to be humble - you must focus everything like a laser beam to communicate benefits and results so prospects say 'that's exactly what I need'

Eben addresses common resistance: 'Most gurus or experts or authors or coaches, they like to be modest. They don't want to be boastful' but explains 'when it comes time to sell... it's not the time to be humble... This is the time when you need to take everything that you've learned and focus it like a laser beam.'

ReframeEmpowering4:08

Professional marketing is not about being pushy - it's about communicating exactly what the other person wants by stating their problem and the result they desire in a powerful communication

Eben clarifies: 'professional marketing, professional sales, professional promotion, it's not about being pushy. It's not about being too forward with people. It's about communicating exactly what the other person wants.'

TeachingEmpowering4:34

Your elevator pitch must wordsmith every single word to become crystal clear and compelling - it's almost like a headline that grabs attention and compels action

Eben emphasizes precision: 'when we're creating an elevator pitch, a short statement that communicates everything the prospect needs to know to become interested and to make a decision... This is the time to wordsmith every single word.'

TeachingEmpowering5:34

There's a window of opportunity when meeting new people for the first time - most experts let these huge opportunities go by without delivering a powerful compelling message, causing prospects to lose interest

Eben warns: 'in most cases, what gurus or experts or information marketers do is they let these huge opportunities go right by, and they don't have a powerful compelling message to open up with. And therefore, they lose most of their opportunity.'

TeachingEmpowering6:07

The 5-part elevator pitch formula: 1) 'I help' + specific prospect description, 2) 'who' + specific problem, 3) specific result/benefit, 4) convenience factor, 5) engagement hook question

Eben provides the complete formula breakdown: 'starts with the words I help... describe our specific prospect... you're going to say the word who... describe the specific problem... what you're going to help them achieve... add convenience... create a hook.'

TeachingEmpowering7:23

The convenience factor addresses what prospects fear - for weight loss it's 'without starvation diets or torturing themselves with military exercise' which removes the biggest objection

Eben explains the psychology: 'So that's a big benefit because it's the thing that everyone fears. To lose the weight, I'm gonna have to go on a starvation diet or do military torture exercise.'

TeachingEmpowering8:16

The hook question should be phrased so it doesn't point a finger at the prospect directly - 'Do you know any women who would like to lose 20 pounds quickly?' allows them to answer about themselves or recommend friends

Eben explains the psychology: 'this gives the other person an opportunity to answer the question. And either they could say yes about themselves, right, Because it asks in a way that doesn't point a finger at them. Or they can recommend a friend.'

TeachingEmpowering8:36

Elevator pitches work as great headlines and video openings - they're powerful first impressions whether used in person, in videos, or online

Eben notes the versatility: 'You can see that these also, by the way, are they're great headlines. Each of these would make great openings to a video. They're really great first impressions to make on people whether you're doing it in person or you're doing it in a video or online.'

TeachingEmpowering9:14

Condense your elevator pitch into a title for products or coaching series by extracting the juiciest part - focusing on results, benefits, outcomes and convenience

Eben demonstrates: 'I could summarize that down to a short title, lose 20 pounds of fat in ninety days... I'm focusing on the results, on the benefits, on the outcomes, on the convenience, and I'm just extracting the juiciest part.'

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Key Teachings 12

An elevator pitch must be compelling enough that someone would want to do business with you by the time you reach your floor - you only have a few seconds to make this impression

0:31

Most people answer 'what do you do' with generic statements about themselves like 'I'm a writer' or 'I'm a relationship coach' - this approach fails because it's all about them instead of the prospect's needs

1:17

A powerful elevator pitch example: 'I help overweight women who wanna lose more than 20 pounds get rid of their extra body fat in as little as ninety days without starvation diets or torturing themselves with military exercise. Do you know any women who would like to lose more than 20 pounds quickly?'

1:50

When it comes time to sell or make a first impression, it's not the time to be humble - you must focus everything like a laser beam to communicate benefits and results so prospects say 'that's exactly what I need'

3:11

Professional marketing is not about being pushy - it's about communicating exactly what the other person wants by stating their problem and the result they desire in a powerful communication

4:08

Your elevator pitch must wordsmith every single word to become crystal clear and compelling - it's almost like a headline that grabs attention and compels action

4:34

There's a window of opportunity when meeting new people for the first time - most experts let these huge opportunities go by without delivering a powerful compelling message, causing prospects to lose interest

5:34

The 5-part elevator pitch formula: 1) 'I help' + specific prospect description, 2) 'who' + specific problem, 3) specific result/benefit, 4) convenience factor, 5) engagement hook question

6:07

The convenience factor addresses what prospects fear - for weight loss it's 'without starvation diets or torturing themselves with military exercise' which removes the biggest objection

7:23

The hook question should be phrased so it doesn't point a finger at the prospect directly - 'Do you know any women who would like to lose 20 pounds quickly?' allows them to answer about themselves or recommend friends

8:16

Elevator pitches work as great headlines and video openings - they're powerful first impressions whether used in person, in videos, or online

8:36

Condense your elevator pitch into a title for products or coaching series by extracting the juiciest part - focusing on results, benefits, outcomes and convenience

9:14

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Counterpoint 3

Claim:When asked what you do, describe your role or profession like 'I'm a writer' or 'I'm a relationship coach'

Reframe: Focus on your customer's specific problem and the result you deliver, not your title or profession

Claim:Stay humble and modest when describing what you do to avoid seeming pushy or boastful

Reframe: When selling or making first impressions, focus everything like a laser beam to communicate benefits - it's not the time to be humble

Claim:Professional marketing and sales means being pushy and forward with people

Reframe: Professional marketing is about communicating exactly what the other person wants by understanding their problems and desired results

Quotable Moments

when it comes time to sell, when someone's going to buy something from you or when it comes time to make a first impression, it's not the time to be humble

Eben Pagan3:11

professional marketing, professional sales, professional promotion, it's not about being pushy. It's not about being too forward with people. It's about communicating exactly what the other person wants.

Eben Pagan4:08

This is the time when you need to take everything that you've learned and focus it like a laser beam to communicate the benefits and the results that you offer

Eben Pagan3:44

when we're creating an elevator pitch, a short statement that communicates everything the prospect needs to know to become interested and to make a decision, hey, I should check this out. This is the time to wordsmith every single word

Eben Pagan4:34

Topics

Business Frameworks

elevator pitch

Common Mistakes

self-focused messagingexcessive humility in salespushy sales approachmissing first impression opportunities

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