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How To Write Great Headlines

How To Write Great Headlines

Eben Pagan breaks down the psychology and structure of high-converting headlines, sharing six of the most successful headlines in history and proven formulas that capture attention instantly. He teaches how to identify emotion-laden words and construct headlines that answer the critical questions every prospect is asking unconsciously.

How To Write Great Headlines

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The Psychology Behind High-Converting Headlines

Eben reveals that headlines must answer two critical unconscious questions every prospect asks: why they should care and why they should pay attention. He reframes headlines as the advertisement for the advertisement, explaining how people skim content and make split-second decisions based on first impressions.

Analyzing History's Most Successful Headlines

Through analysis of six famous headlines including Dale Carnegie's book title and the iconic Rolls Royce ad, Eben demonstrates how the word 'how' puts prospects in action-step mode. He breaks down the layered psychology that makes these headlines so effective at triggering emotion and promising value.

Seven Universal Headline Motivators and Formulas

Eben teaches seven psychological triggers that motivate prospects: new/news, discovery, proven results, love/attraction, health/wellness, automatic systems, and pain avoidance. He provides specific formulas and examples for each, showing how to build headlines progressively from single power words.

Questions This Episode Answers

What are the most important questions prospects ask when they see a headline?

The first question they're asking is, why should I care about what you're saying? And the next question is, why should I pay attention to you for this entire message?

Eben Pagan1:59

Prospects unconsciously ask two critical questions: 'Why should I care about what you're saying?' and 'Why should I pay attention to you for this entire message?' If you don't answer these powerfully at the beginning, you'll either never get their attention or lose them partway through.

Why do successful headlines often start with the word 'how'?

When you say how to, it immediately puts the prospect's mind into a mode where it's thinking action steps. It's going to learn techniques. It's going to learn step by step strategies.

Eben Pagan9:34

Starting with 'how' immediately puts prospects' minds into action-step mode where they expect to learn specific techniques and step-by-step strategies. Four of the six most successful headlines in history start with 'how,' including 'How to Win Friends and Influence People' which sold 15 million copies.

What makes the Rolls Royce headline so effective?

At 60 miles an hour, which is very specific, the loudest noise in the Rolls Royce comes from the electric clock, what you're saying is this Rolls Royce is really quiet when it's out on the highway. It's saying all the right things without having to say them.

Eben Pagan10:21

The headline 'At 60 miles an hour, the loudest noise in this new Rolls Royce comes from the electric clock' uses layered psychology to imply luxury without stating it directly. The specific detail of 60 mph and the electric clock being the loudest noise communicates that the car is exceptionally quiet and luxurious.

How should you build a headline from scratch?

If you could only write a one word headline, which word would you choose? What word did you come up with that was the kind of highest emotion value?

Eben Pagan5:50

Start with one word that has the highest emotional value for your target audience, then progressively add words. For weight loss, start with 'fat,' then 'belly fat?', then 'credit card debt' for financial products. Always ensure your most emotionally powerful word appears early in the headline.

What are the seven powerful headline motivators?

The first one is anything that's new or news. And the words that go with this concept are new, news, now, announcing, finally.

Eben Pagan11:07

The seven motivators are: New/News (using words like 'announcing,' 'finally'), Discovery ('uncover,' 'reveal,' 'secret'), Proven Results ('proof,' 'results'), Love/Attraction, Health/Wellness, Automatic Systems, and Pain/Risk Avoidance. Each taps into fundamental human psychology.

Why is targeting qualified prospects more important than maximizing reach?

It doesn't do any good to have a million people reading your ad or listening to your sales message if none of them are qualified to buy.

Eben Pagan5:01

Having a million unqualified readers is worthless compared to attracting the right prospects who can actually buy. A headline like 'free money' for a billionaires-only product won't attract the right audience. You want to trigger emotion in qualified prospects, not just anyone.

How to Build Powerful Headlines That Convert

A systematic approach to creating headlines that capture attention and motivate action

  1. 1

    Identify Your One Power Word

    Choose the single word with highest emotional value for your target audience - the word that triggers the strongest response in qualified prospects.

  2. 2

    Build Progressively

    Expand from one word to two words, then three words, always keeping your most powerful emotional word early in the headline.

  3. 3

    Apply Proven Motivators

    Use one of the seven motivators: New/News, Discovery, Proven Results, Love/Attraction, Health/Wellness, Automatic Systems, or Pain/Risk Avoidance.

  4. 4

    Test Multiple Formulas

    Create at least 10 variations using the seven headline formulas: result-focused, pain-focused, situation-focused, action-focused, customer-focused, approach-focused, and magic transformation.

  5. 5

    Ensure Qualified Targeting

    Verify your headline attracts only prospects who are qualified and able to buy your product or service, not just maximum reach.

All Teachings 10

TeachingEmpowering1:59

Headlines must answer two critical unconscious questions prospects ask: 'Why should I care about what you're saying?' and 'Why should I pay attention to you for this entire message?'

Eben identifies these as the first unconscious questions prospects ask, emphasizing they need powerful answers at the very beginning or you'll lose attention

ReframeEmpowering3:24

A headline is the marketing piece for the marketing piece - it's the advertisement for the advertisement that determines whether prospects engage with your content

Eben explains people quickly glance at headlines and decide in seconds whether to engage, making the headline the critical filter

TeachingEmpowering4:02

Humans are skimmers who judge books by their covers - you have only a few seconds to capture attention and communicate a powerful motivating benefit

Eben notes that with all the communication coming in, people must sort it quickly and click to the next thing if not immediately convinced

TeachingEmpowering7:43

Every word is money when creating marketing copy - don't waste words and ensure your highest emotion-value word appears early in the headline

Eben emphasizes choosing words that describe the solution, outcome, result, or the pain/fear/problem, stating 'Every word is money' twice for emphasis

TeachingEmpowering8:32

Four of the six most successful headlines in history start with 'How' because it immediately puts prospects' minds into action-step mode, expecting to learn techniques

Eben analyzes headlines including 'How to Win Friends and Influence People' (15 million copies sold), 'How to Double Your Child's Grades,' and others, noting the 'How' pattern

Expert InsightEmpowering10:21

The Rolls Royce headline 'At 60 miles an hour, the loudest noise comes from the electric clock' communicates luxury without directly stating it through specific, layered psychology

Eben explains this headline implies the car is quiet like 'driving a cloud' by using the specific detail of 60 mph and the electric clock being the loudest noise

TeachingEmpowering11:07

Seven powerful headline motivators: New/News (new, announcing, finally), Discovery (uncover, reveal, secret), Proven Results (proof, results, accountability), Love/Attraction, Health/Wellness, Automatic Systems, and Pain/Risk Avoidance

Eben provides specific examples for each: 'Now you can finally lose 11 pounds,' 'Discover the secret athletes use,' 'proven system for losing,' etc.

TeachingEmpowering17:21

The word 'Free' is possibly the most powerful word in English - concepts like 'no cost,' 'try before you buy,' and 'free sample' are universally motivating

Eben gives example 'Free: Three action steps to lose 11 pounds of belly fat in eleven days' and emphasizes not to discount the word free

TeachingEmpowering5:50

Start with one-word headlines using highest emotion-value words, then build to two and three words, ensuring the most powerful emotion word stays early in longer headlines

Eben gives examples: 'fat' to 'belly fat?' to 'credit card debt' and explains this builds headlines 'one brick at a time' using emotional power words

ReframeEmpowering5:01

Only attract prospects qualified to buy your product - a headline that gets a million unqualified readers is worthless compared to one that attracts the right prospects

Eben uses example of 'free money' headline for billionaires-only product, showing how wrong headlines waste resources on unqualified traffic

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Key Teachings 10

Headlines must answer two critical unconscious questions prospects ask: 'Why should I care about what you're saying?' and 'Why should I pay attention to you for this entire message?'

1:59

A headline is the marketing piece for the marketing piece - it's the advertisement for the advertisement that determines whether prospects engage with your content

3:24

Humans are skimmers who judge books by their covers - you have only a few seconds to capture attention and communicate a powerful motivating benefit

4:02

Every word is money when creating marketing copy - don't waste words and ensure your highest emotion-value word appears early in the headline

7:43

Four of the six most successful headlines in history start with 'How' because it immediately puts prospects' minds into action-step mode, expecting to learn techniques

8:32

The Rolls Royce headline 'At 60 miles an hour, the loudest noise comes from the electric clock' communicates luxury without directly stating it through specific, layered psychology

10:21

Seven powerful headline motivators: New/News (new, announcing, finally), Discovery (uncover, reveal, secret), Proven Results (proof, results, accountability), Love/Attraction, Health/Wellness, Automatic Systems, and Pain/Risk Avoidance

11:07

The word 'Free' is possibly the most powerful word in English - concepts like 'no cost,' 'try before you buy,' and 'free sample' are universally motivating

17:21

Start with one-word headlines using highest emotion-value words, then build to two and three words, ensuring the most powerful emotion word stays early in longer headlines

5:50

Only attract prospects qualified to buy your product - a headline that gets a million unqualified readers is worthless compared to one that attracts the right prospects

5:01

Counterpoint 2

Claim:Headlines should attract as many people as possible to maximize reach

Reframe: Headlines should only attract qualified prospects who can actually buy your product or service

Claim:Headlines are just the opening words of your marketing message

Reframe: Headlines are the marketing piece for the marketing piece - the advertisement for the advertisement

Quotable Moments

Every word is money when you're creating marketing copy.

Eben Pagan7:43

A headline is really the marketing piece for the marketing piece. It's the advertisement for the advertisement.

Eben Pagan3:24

Humans are skimmers. We have to judge the book by its cover.

Eben Pagan4:02

Don't discount the word free. No pun intended.

Eben Pagan18:15

Topics

Coaching Strategies

headline psychologyprospect qualification

Business Frameworks

seven headline motivatorsprogressive headline buildinghow-to formula

Common Mistakes

attracting unqualified prospectswasting words in copy

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